Saigo

Posted Apr 13, 2010, 10:37:35 PM UTC

Some random person again I drew XD I dont like the jacket though. I needa work on that XD Also know I made some mistakes XD I wanna get better :3 Critic me hard! XD

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ArkillianDragon
Apr 24, 2010, 2:58:40 AM UTC
The length of the upper arm (shoulder to the elbow) is the same length as from the shoulder to the belly button. Not sure why the jacket flares out like that though... Um... There's a few other issues with your based human structure here. I'm not sure if you want me to go into that...
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- Tacom33t
  May 6, 2010, 11:10:16 AM UTC
  Go for it XD Hence why I put roast me so I can get better XD I wants all the advice I can get :3
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  Tacom33t
  May 11, 2010, 3:31:33 AM UTC
  Oh and btw I did this like 2 years ago XD I can put something more recent up here for critic :3 It's just I want some really good critic with this one so I can make sure I get everything right with newer ones XD
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  ArkillianDragon
  May 17, 2010, 10:48:22 AM UTC
  Oh- ok. You're lucky I spotted this. You replied to yourself so I didn't get it ^^; I'd rather critique a new picture because you may've picked up a few new tricks in 2 years. Two years can improve art ALOT.
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  ArkillianDragon
  May 17, 2010, 10:50:17 AM UTC
  Um... can you link me something recent so I can give a better crit? Even if you have to start something from scratch. It's still better to crit that now rather than the then.
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  Tacom33t
  May 17, 2010, 4:26:50 PM UTC
  Try true. Ok XD I'll get something up today or tomorrow
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