Yes Master

Posted Aug 15, 2008, 2:54:52 AM UTC

_{Created we were, made in the labs from five beings whose weakness' were destroyed to make us. Our first Master fashioned us as the perfect monster, a perfect killer made to follow His orders. Our collar is our way of knowing His will.

Why bow to His whim when we are stronger than him, you ask? But a slave we are, we will forever be His, a perfect eternal pet. We cannot die for Master would not allow it. Who would protect Him if we were gone?

Fighting to protect Master, fighting for Master's enjoyment, it is our greatest pleasure. The scent of terror mixed with the taste of a living victim's flesh and blood is the greatest reward our Master grants us, the opportunity to taste it's sweetness is ours only when we please Him. The feel of blood on our claws sends a shudder down our spine, the mere thought of warm flesh causes our mouth to water.

Master is allowing us to feed now, to gather our energy so we can better serve Him. The pitiful human whimpers in fear but we simply smirk. You will give us much, your strength becoming ours so we can protect Master.}

Sin property of Frizzycrls at DA. Picture itself, mine.

Comments

ThePurpleButterfly33
Nov 15, 2008, 8:39:07 AM UTC
This is a really good drawing, but I have some minor things to complain about if you don't mind.

To me, I think his limbs are quite small compared to the rest of his figure. And the shoulders seem odd to me in a way. Maybe you should practice drawing figures of simple characters and try to keep the body in similar sizes. Then come back and redraw this.

It is still a wonderful peice though, good work on the hair and wings. I suck so far at drawings wings...>.<
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- sapphireinu
  Nov 15, 2008, 4:23:14 PM UTC
  Thank you for the honesty. It is really appresiated. This is the second time I have gone back and drawn this, I'm almost afraid to go back and do it again ^^; I shall take this all to heart and keep pracising. His arms and legs are suppose to be...thicker, but I am sooo use to drawing Sin's alter ego, the skinny bastard that he is. Muscles are still givng me problems, same with shoulder!
  
  Wings are tough. So don't worry! I myself still have big issues when I draw them.
  
  Thank you for commenting
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  ThePurpleButterfly33
  Nov 17, 2008, 1:29:44 PM UTC
  Your welcome! And yeah, muscles are tough to draw and you just have to look at pics with well-drawn muscles in order to know what it looks like. Skinny bastards are tough, I'll admit. XD
  
  I guess on those dudes you just draw their limbs like a chicks. ^-^
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4295
Aug 25, 2008, 12:46:36 PM UTC
The coloring is really nice, but his limbs seem a bit small.
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