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Eláfkeria ARPG - Design Approval & Corrections

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  2. Posted on Jan 6, 2021, 11:08:57 AM UTC
    ID: 32041 | #22
    PaintSet
    Level 4OOC
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    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/PaintSet

    First-Time Design: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/art/view/41599

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101217

    Special Note: I'm a first-time owner!

  3. Posted on Jan 6, 2021, 7:14:50 PM UTC
    ID: 32047 | #23
    agrizian
    Level 1OOC
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    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/agrizian

    Design: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/art/view/41610

    Previous Version(s): https://sta.sh/01l6fwvhejoz

    Correction Comment: https://www.paperdemon.com/forums/forum-art-rpg-player-trackers/5512_elafkeria-arpg-design-approval-ampamp-corrections/post_31946

    Proof of Ownership:  https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101198

    Items: --

    Design Notes: --

  5. Posted on Jan 7, 2021, 8:38:36 PM UTC
    ID: 32081 | #25
    Elafkeria-ARPG
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    On Jan 4, 2021, BraveKnight said:

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/BraveKnight

    First-Time Design: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1INQ0rwzNgxu2J3RLWgtZuk9X7Ne7w9NA/view?usp=drivesdk

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101175

    Items: -

    Design Notes: -

    Special Note: I'm a first-time owner!

    One more step! You have a handsome baby boy on your hands here, I love him! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:

    - Frosted should be lighter than the base coat! 
     
    - The base seems to of been taken from the Ivory sliders of Amber, instead of the Soil sliders! (These three in the middle!)
     
    - Beak doesn't cover the minimum area, and needs to be expanded to cover the bridge of the nose along here.
     
    - Blanket goes out of range for coverage along the wings and chest area. I t also doesn't fully cover the minimum range. I've highlighted the out of range areas in red, and where there needs to be more coverage in orange here.
     
    - Tips crosses over into Dom Coverage at some points I've highlighted here.
     
    - Unders peeks out coverage slightly next to the wing, highlighted here.
     
    Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum. 
    -- DopeyOakeyNuts

    Last edited by Elafkeria-ARPG on Jan 7, 2021, 9:05:25 PM UTC. 1 total edits.

  6. Posted on Jan 7, 2021, 9:05:07 PM UTC
    ID: 32082 | #26
    Elafkeria-ARPG
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    On Jan 4, 2021, Kassumi-7921 said:

    PaperDemon URL: Kassumi-7921

    First-Time Design: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/art/view/41584

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101176

    Items: xx

    Design Notes: Unders is on the belly over the Pangare, Pangare is showing moreso on the legs.  Cupid is hiding under that Piebald there, I did add it on the pre-pied version. Tongue

    Special Note: I am a first time designer. <3

    One more step! Ah, the Cyan looks so nice, and works so well with the piebald! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:

    - Bib goes slightly out of range here next to the chin.
     
    - There's a small errant spot on the rosette on the top left that'll need to be fixed.
     
    - Min WHite should still resemble white, and should be much lighter than it currently is.
     
    - Piebald cannot completely cover a marking! Both Cupid and Tips will need to be visible somewhere on the design. 
     
    Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum. 
    -- DopeyOakeyNuts
     

     

  7. Posted on Jan 8, 2021, 4:51:15 AM UTC
    ID: 32090 | #27
    Elafkeria-ARPG
    Level 4OOC
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    On Jan 4, 2021, DashOfJupiter said:

     

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/DashOfJupiter

    Design: https://sta.sh/0270ebk7oz2p

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101178

    Items: UC Add-on x1, C Add-on x1 

    Proof in Sta.sh.

    Design Notes: I'm a first time owner!

     

    One more step! Ah, this design looks so soft and sweet! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:

    - Deer Stripe is slightly out of range along the back of the neck, and on the rump! I've highlighted the areas here and here for you.
     
    - Min White goes over maximum coverage in a few spots on the face here.
     
    - Burned should fully cover the minimum range on the legs, head, and wings up to where I've marked for you here. While Burned can have blurred edges, it should still be easily visible up to the minimum coverage. There has additionally been some recent updates to the guide for Burned that you may want to look over as you go over your corrections, though these aforementioned errors to the design were judged by the previous verison of the guide. 
     
    - In Piebald, there  are a few small spots that'll need to be erased, as well as small holes that'll need to be filled, as Piebald cannot have either "present small holes inside the splotches," and "must have large to medium sized splotches." as stated in the guide. I've outlined them for you here.
     
    - The Rosettes on the wing/shoulder here should be clearer in shape, comprising to 3 dark spots connected by a main spot forming the base. It's important to have both the light base and the darker spots as to not resemble Speckled or Frosted. You can see a real life example here
     
    - In the genotype on the import, the two marking add-ons should be recessive. ( ss/Ii/ee/nBr/nBa/nVe/nRo/nPb ) 
     
    Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum. 
    -- DopeyOakeyNuts
  8. Posted on Jan 8, 2021, 4:51:16 AM UTC
    ID: 32091 | #28
    Elafkeria-ARPG
    Level 4OOC
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    On Jan 4, 2021, DashOfJupiter said:

     

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/DashOfJupiter

    Design: https://sta.sh/0270ebk7oz2p

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101178

    Items: UC Add-on x1, C Add-on x1 

    Proof in Sta.sh.

    Design Notes: I'm a first time owner!

     

    One more step! Ah, this design looks so soft and sweet! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:

    - Deer Stripe is slightly out of range along the back of the neck, and on the rump! I've highlighted the areas here and here for you.
     
    - Min White goes over maximum coverage in a few spots on the face here.
     
    - Burned should fully cover the minimum range on the legs, head, and wings up to where I've marked for you here. While Burned can have blurred edges, it should still be easily visible up to the minimum coverage. There has additionally been some recent updates to the guide for Burned that you may want to look over as you go over your corrections, though these aforementioned errors to the design were judged by the previous verison of the guide. 
     
    - In Piebald, there  are a few small spots that'll need to be erased, as well as small holes that'll need to be filled, as Piebald cannot have either "present small holes inside the splotches," and "must have large to medium sized splotches." as stated in the guide. I've outlined them for you here.
     
    - The Rosettes on the wing/shoulder here should be clearer in shape, comprising to 3 dark spots connected by a main spot forming the base. It's important to have both the light base and the darker spots as to not resemble Speckled or Frosted. You can see a real life example here
     
    - In the genotype on the import, the two marking add-ons should be recessive. ( ss/Ii/ee/nBr/nBa/nVe/nRo/nPb ) 
     
    Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum. 
    -- DopeyOakeyNuts
  9. Posted on Jan 8, 2021, 4:51:17 AM UTC
    ID: 32092 | #29
    Elafkeria-ARPG
    Level 4OOC
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    On Jan 4, 2021, DashOfJupiter said:

     

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/DashOfJupiter

    Design: https://sta.sh/0270ebk7oz2p

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101178

    Items: UC Add-on x1, C Add-on x1 

    Proof in Sta.sh.

    Design Notes: I'm a first time owner!

     

    One more step! Ah, this design looks so soft and sweet! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:

    - Deer Stripe is slightly out of range along the back of the neck, and on the rump! I've highlighted the areas here and here for you.
     
    - Min White goes over maximum coverage in a few spots on the face here.
     
    - Burned should fully cover the minimum range on the legs, head, and wings up to where I've marked for you here. While Burned can have blurred edges, it should still be easily visible up to the minimum coverage. There has additionally been some recent updates to the guide for Burned that you may want to look over as you go over your corrections, though these aforementioned errors to the design were judged by the previous verison of the guide. 
     
    - In Piebald, there  are a few small spots that'll need to be erased, as well as small holes that'll need to be filled, as Piebald cannot have either "present small holes inside the splotches," and "must have large to medium sized splotches." as stated in the guide. I've outlined them for you here.
     
    - The Rosettes on the wing/shoulder here should be clearer in shape, comprising to 3 dark spots connected by a main spot forming the base. It's important to have both the light base and the darker spots as to not resemble Speckled or Frosted. You can see a real life example here
     
    - In the genotype on the import, the two marking add-ons should be recessive. ( ss/Ii/ee/nBr/nBa/nVe/nRo/nPb ) 
     
    Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum. 
    -- DopeyOakeyNuts
  10. Posted on Jan 9, 2021, 4:52:15 AM UTC
    ID: 32114 | #30
    BraveKnight
    Level 2OOC
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