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Eláfkeria ARPG - Design Approval & Corrections

  1. Posted on Jan 3, 2021, 1:40:50 AM UTC
    ID: 31944 | #13
    GeneralRadon
    Level 1
    XP

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/GeneralRadon

    First-Time Design: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pv5judROjZhCdhQyZXmJiEgLpARmQN9q/view?usp=sharing

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101170

    Items: Common Marking Add-On x1: Frost  https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101203

    Design Notes: I'm honestly not sure if this is colored outside the lines, especially in places like the hooves. The broken lines confuse me a little haha

    Special Note: I'm a first-time owner!

  2. Posted on Jan 3, 2021, 6:52:56 AM UTC
    ID: 31946 | #15
    Elafkeria-ARPG
    Level 4
    XP

    On Jan 1, 2021, agrizian said:

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/agrizian

    First-Time Design: https://sta.sh/01l6fwvhejoz

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101198

    Design Notes: -

    Special Note: I'm a first-time owner!

    One more step! Such a handsome lad, I love what you've done! But there are a few corrections you'll need to do before we can approve this:

    - The point of Sun dips a little too low, so it doesn't quite cover the minimum required range! The outline does not count for coverage and must remain within the max recessive area. Additionally, the outline goes beyond coverage on the jaw here. I've highlighted the areas here.
     
    - Unders curves a little too low along the belly, and dips below the minimum required range here. Unders also bleeds into the dom coverage along the leg here.
     
    - Beak doesn't quite cover the minimum area, and needs to be expanded to cover the bridge of the nose along here.
     
    - Since Amber is affecting the base, and is recessive, it cannot affect Blixem as well! It can only affect base dependent markings (like Burn) while Blixem is any natural color. 
     
    Once you've made the corrections, please reupload your Eláfkeri through the Design Corrections form in the forum. 
    -- DopeyOakeyNuts
     

     

  3. Posted on Jan 4, 2021, 6:28:36 AM UTC
    ID: 31967 | #17
    Kassuna
    Level 14
    XP

    PaperDemon URL:  Kassuna Kassuna

    First-Time Design: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/art/view/41584

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101176

    Items: xx

    Design Notes: Unders is on the belly over the Pangare, Pangare is showing moreso on the legs.  Cupid is hiding under that Piebald there, I did add it on the pre-pied version. :P

    Special Note: I am a first time designer. <3

  4. Posted on Jan 4, 2021, 3:00:54 PM UTC
    ID: 31975 | #19
    Elafkeria-ARPG
    Level 4
    XP

    On Jan 2, 2021, DashOfJupiter said:

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/forums/editpost.php?post_id=31943# 

    Design: https://sta.sh/0270ebk7oz2p

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/100972

    Design Notes: I'm a first time owner!

    Hello! Your request seems to be missing the correct link to your Paperdemon profile, as well as a link to your specific geno from the event. Please reupload your request with the complete information as a new form in the forum.

    -- DopeyOakeyNuts

  5. Posted on Jan 4, 2021, 4:25:43 PM UTC
    ID: 31991 | #20
    Elafkeria-ARPG
    Level 4
    XP

    On Jan 3, 2021, GeneralRadon said:

    PaperDemon URL: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/u/GeneralRadon

    First-Time Design: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pv5judROjZhCdhQyZXmJiEgLpARmQN9q/view?usp=sharing

    Proof of Ownership: https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101170

    Items: Common Marking Add-On x1: Frost  https://www.paperdemon.com/app/comments/view/101203

    Design Notes: I'm honestly not sure if this is colored outside the lines, especially in places like the hooves. The broken lines confuse me a little haha

    Special Note: I'm a first-time owner!

    Approved

    -- DopeyOakeyNuts

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