Comment 93380
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That braid looks like it would be handy for the amount of hair she has, I like how her hips and feet came out. Where her arms attach could use some work, but nice piece none the less. Maybe you could have a lake or waterfall in the back?
Comment ID 93380
![[Art] Reverie](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_36976_d792242e7066aa484d436a521100d07a5ebca44ebe700.jpg)
Thanks. ^^
What do you feel could be improved RE: her arms/shoulders? I haven't started inking her yet so there's still time to alter things in the sketch.
What do you feel could be improved RE: her arms/shoulders? I haven't started inking her yet so there's still time to alter things in the sketch.
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MaskedLin I think her shoulder comes out too much- it looks longer than the other one, and bringing the whole arm in a bit would do it good. That, or bring her side out more.