Comment 22749

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Jan 15, 2006, 8:03:57 AM UTC
I don't know Soul Caliber as I haven't played or seen anything decent for a long time.Sad But this guy's is cool.Grin
I love his clothes and the green hair and eyes.
Now, a few things to fix. First of all, he looks a bit off in proportion and a little asymmetrical. I think his body should have been a little longer cause usually an adult's body is at least three times the length of the head. Just remember that for the next time. His body seems flat, squished into his arm. One more thing, his pupils seem as if he's looking at his nose, all you need to do is change the direction the light comes from in Lee's right eye. As for shading, you could either use different shades of pencils or for example use a black pen to go over the lines, or some other medium. Hope it helped.Upsidedown
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Comment ID 22749

[Art] Thanks from Lee and I
Jan 15, 2006, 8:50:25 AM UTC on [Art] Thanks from Lee and I
Eeek, don't know Soul Calibur? O.O. If you've a PS2 you MUST MUST get it! lol XD. And yes, my Lee IS cool isn't he? ^^. I agree with you in him looking of asymetrically, especially with how I have his shoulders, it's like I scrunched him or something, though I did give it a go with him being turned sideways, perhaps if I broadened him out more o.o,. I also agree with his eyes..too me though, instead of looking like he's stairing at his nose, he looks more like he has been drugged and just woke up O_x. Thanks for the advice and comments ^_^

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  • Jan 16, 2006, 4:46:26 AM UTC
    Of course I don't, are you kidding me? I have no PS2. All I play is what I can download. lol.
    You know, if you don't want him looking distorted then you should try drawing sort of a stick man first in order to get his proportions right, I'm not quit sure how to put it in English, hope it made sense to you. Hehe, he really looks drugged now that you mention it. Sortof reminds me of Ville Valo.Laughing Anyhow, youre welcome.^^