Comment 196

Comment ID 196

Jun 5, 2004, 2:19:21 AM UTC on Art id 463. (Art is no longer available.)
HEy Red!
Cute little munchkin!
What's buggin me though are those areas of yellow. It feels too abrasive. Also I'm not totally sure of your core shadows. I see one on the face on the right side of the nose. Maybe if you go easy on the yellow this elf could be better.

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  • Jun 5, 2004, 8:30:44 AM UTC
    Thankyou chang. I think I'll work on it today and upload another version. Would you mind critiquing it again after the second version is up?