Comment 123879

Comment ID 123879

Mar 23, 2022, 6:49:40 PM UTC on [Writing] a kid with mixed thoughts
Be careful about capitalisation, sentences should start with capital letters and names usually do but if not it should be consistent (is the character called Polly or polly?)

I'd like to critique the story but don't think I can experience the emotions you're trying to evoke and am not sure that's the fault of the story.

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