Dawn - CyberGoddess

Perplexity
Posted Mar 26, 2006, 3:24:21 AM UTC
Cry For Dawn - in the future!  JML, you are the bomb.

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  • kyvie
    Mar 26, 2006, 10:58:55 PM UTC
    Oooh, she's sexy. *shot dead* No, I'm loving the shape and detailing on the gun and her outfit in general, and the shapely anatomy is really appealing. If I were to crit aything, is her right leg: in my experience the leg doesn't usually bow in at the knee - in fact, it curves out instead. I think if you bend it in like that it makes her posture seem more awkward. :3 I hope that made sense. Heart Her other leg is gorgeous, though, and your pencil work is so cleeean.
    • Perplexity
      Apr 9, 2006, 6:14:50 PM UTC
      I kept trying to draw and redraw and erased until the paper wore thin and realized... hey maybe I should just start over! Thank you for liking the rest of her though Wink
  • animegurl9405
    Mar 26, 2006, 8:23:14 AM UTC
    Wow she is gorgeos!! OMG!! I love her keep up the good work.Wink
  • ArkillianDragon
    Mar 25, 2006, 9:07:00 PM UTC
    Ahhhh- Dawn :3 Haven't seen any fan art of her before- never really figured out what she could do, but the guy who draws her is an absolute ledgend ^^

    For advanced crit- her body isn't curving with her pelvic tilt. Her pelvis is tilted too much for her not to be curved around so her shoulders are above her hips again. Her legs are a little wide apart for the tilt angle too. Unless her character has gymnastic legs and can do the splits- its not too comfortable.
    • Perplexity
      Mar 26, 2006, 6:07:28 AM UTC
      After scanning it in, the legs really bothered me, too Doh Maybe I go back and fix it... or maybe she just lives the rest of her life with a limp.Annoyed
      • ArkillianDragon
        Mar 26, 2006, 10:14:01 PM UTC
        >Smile Go the limp!!! Naugh, if you want to fix it, it'll be worth it. Its a funny concept to 'let her limp' though! XD Never thought of it that way!! I can't imaginge what would happen if some of my characters could walk...
  • majinbulgeta
    Mar 25, 2006, 7:43:40 PM UTC
    your pictures are always so great!!! =D

    Just one little comment since you have it on "roast me". Her left leg seems to be a bit too long. ^^;

    But its still awesome!!! =333
    • Perplexity
      Mar 26, 2006, 6:08:15 AM UTC
      Maybe if I chop that leg off... hmmm hehehhe Thanks for the roast and the compliment all rolled into one!
      • majinbulgeta
        Mar 26, 2006, 10:24:29 AM UTC
        you welcome! Heart

        Yeah i just thought the legs looked a little unbalanced XDDD
        • Perplexity
          Mar 26, 2006, 5:47:14 PM UTC
          Oh man, it looks terrible the more I look at her lol I must fix her legs! She will walk again! *cries* HALLELUJAH!

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