Arianrhod

Salindrai

Posted Jun 3, 2020, 8:34:27 AM UTC

Character Name: Arianrhod aka Aria

Character ID: PD16

Character Age: She has never kept track, but at least 30 human years.

Character Species: Dragonkin (anthro)

Hair color: Peachy Blonde

Eye color: Forest Green

Brief biography: Aria grew up mostly by herself, as a species it was common for "weak" hatchlings to be kicked out of the den, and she happened to be as such. She was adopted by a celtic human village, and lived among them for many years before discovering her inclination for magic. Named after the moon Goddess, Aria studied magic that fell in the alignment of Arianrhod. Moonlight magic was pure, used by the unicorns and other pure beings, she was seen as a blessing on the village, and everyone welcomed her with open arms.

After a time Aria left, staking her own path to enlightenment, and hoping to find someone she may apprentice under as a druid or Arianrhod.

Comments

Aiggy
Jun 4, 2020, 4:38:52 AM UTC
Hello, I think this is a pretty cool character. I saw that you were looking for constructive critique and wanted to help out so I've made a quick rundown of everything in the image I've attached below.

I hope this advice helps you, either at present or in the future!
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- Salindrai
  Jun 4, 2020, 4:50:49 AM UTC
  Aaahhhhh! Bless you! This helps a lot :0 the only thing I'd say is that she is meant to be leaning on the staff she's a bit slouchy, but I've yet to define why she doesn't stand up straight.
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  Aiggy
  Jun 4, 2020, 4:59:30 AM UTC
  Oops! I think you sent this same reply 8 other times.
  Anyhow that's alright. And sorry about that, I wasn't aware the staff-leaning was intentional. Tried to focus on balancing the pose.
  
  Anyways you're always free to take away what you want from the critique image. Just happy to help!
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  Salindrai
  Jun 4, 2020, 5:02:54 AM UTC
  I noticed 😅 I just sent in a bug notice to the discord, I dont know how to delete them aha..
  
  And no you're good! :0 my poses tend to be stiff in the first place so this really helps!! Thank you!
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