A lot of my gallery is full of pituresque summer weather I noticed, which is a little bothersome. I only have a couple pictures where the weather isn't peachy, and in those its raining, which by itself isn't usually bad. Therefore, I'm aiming to make more with extreme weather conditions, like this windstorm here! Its also a great chance to make art of Beah, because she really needs more to show her current design. Here, she's watching Ikadi teach Thamiiu practice how to handle turbulent wind, which seems to be making slow progress, while she herself hides in the canopy below to wait the storm out.
Art and characters belong to me.
Constructive Critique requested.
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I don't get much in the way of strong winds where I'm from, but I can still imagine the wind in this would sound *very* angry.
i see you requested a critique. one thing that I think might make this piece stronger is more contrast. right now you have a lot of mid tones. one technique you could try that would help give you a stronger composition is to make foreground elements darker (such as the tree branches and the dragon in the forground). This would help it feel even more dramatic.
Another suggestion for you is to observe the shapes that the negative space of the branches is creating to add more interest to the composition.
Nice job!