I like the pose and the blade of the sword is really eye catching. What I believe is needed is darker darks here to make the lighter shades really pop. Try working is some shading of skin tones to make the suggestion of muscles. His hands are way too small for him and perhaps added some subtle shading to the background would help. Nice work, thanks for sharing.
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