Fall

Posted Dec 22, 2007, 4:26:16 AM UTC

An illustration for my story I'll probably never write.  Otherwise, very cliche Fall picture with Lonan saying good-bye to his love Gabrielle after he chooses to take his brother Lucifer's side.  I don't think she likes him so much anymore. 

Lineart and color done in Photoshop. 

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  • Dec 23, 2007, 5:38:27 AM UTC
    Yeah- they do feel very distant here. She's not even looking at him Sad What's happening with his top? It looks half off or something- I'm not sure how it's meant to sit ^^;
    • Dec 23, 2007, 8:20:42 PM UTC
      Hehe, she's supposed to be looking at him, I'm just ve-ery bad at eye contact.

      His clothes are supposed to be a bit lamely symbolic. The white over-shirt comes off revealing the black underneath.

      Thank you for your input! I appreciate it!
      • Dec 23, 2007, 9:07:27 PM UTC
        Hmmm- maybe if the black covered up to his neck like it was strangling him a little. If the girl was looking up at him, it'd be easier to get contact. She looks like she's glazing past his ankles right now. That's ok though, cause the hostility actually suits the over all mood here. They look like they're forced together for something. Maybe saving the world. There's also a slight hint in her body language that suggest a careing to him. or something. That all feel symbolic ^^ IT's a pretty picture anyways, so there's no need to over analyse it anyways ^^
  • Dec 22, 2007, 5:01:02 AM UTC
    Nice image. Love the wings and clothing. The red sky really creates the mood here.

    Poor guy, will never be with his love again.
    • Dec 23, 2007, 8:22:44 PM UTC
      Thank you very much!

      Well, he'll see her again, but he won't be quite the same and neither will she...
      • Dec 23, 2007, 9:13:20 PM UTC
        Such is the way with time, I suppose. But then again, that's what makes it interesting.
  • Dec 22, 2007, 4:10:52 AM UTC
    this is a great pic. I love the design of their outfit. It's way cool and the character's appearance is really nice
  • Dec 21, 2007, 8:30:56 PM UTC
    I like your style and the interesting clothing they are sporting. I think the addition of cast shadows on the ground would have anchored them a little more to the background, but overall, this is a lovely piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
    • Dec 23, 2007, 8:24:57 PM UTC
      Ah-ha! A cast shadow! I don't know why I didn't think of that... That would've helped a lot.

      Thank you very much for the helpful comment!